I was randomly going through all of my old reviews that I posted when I cam across all of my old reviews for Brotherly Love. A beautiful tale of the Jonas Brothers sleeping with each other. Laughing to myself, I went back to that great piece of fan fiction and went to see some of the other reviews left resently. Apparently, people had been busy. Here are some samples of the next generation of flamers/idiots that will follow us.
k8tiee - Either you are a very clever troll or just a plain ** writer. Please never write again until you stop taking English lessons from a three year old.
deone - that was soo good i was wonderign if you would be in to doin a nick/joe story that incorperated me foot fetish let me no xoxo
roflwaffle22 - im going to make this clear and simple to all you flamers.
GET A LIFE! why are you judging someone on the way they write, when you didnt have to read it at all?!?!?!
you all disgust me, you pendejos.
yeah its a**hole in spanish.
and who cares about typos?
everyone makes mistakes!
ohh, i loved this story by the way, but try to make it a little less, odd, like they jsut confessed their love and now they're ready to have sex... slow it down a tad
loved it though
make a second chapter
Nick J All The Way - WHAT THE ** HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?! OMG!
peaceloveJONASx - sorry, but this is kinda bad. take like a creative writing class or something.
Aoiki Chojutsuka - I love the way people have talk using reviews...moving on to my rant.
I'm sorry but your grammers awful, the story made no sense, and
I think I just died a little inside.
I'll edmit I like incest...yaoi...threesomes...and all that but oh my god there is no better way to say this but you suck.
You can improve though get a beta,(hell even I need a beta), keep writing, do not ignore flames(they help you understand what your doing wrong), and don't get overly cocky. Trust me I was bad to once and even now I'm not so good but the more you write and read the better you get.
Twitchylicious - For God's sake, Lady Murray! I don't like this story, either, but you don't have to say that Kandy wants to have sex with her sister/brother! And I don't think Kandy cares how perverted you think this story is. Because I know I wouldn't. I would write whatever the hell I felt like writing. Why don't you just back off and leave Kandy alone? If you don't like this story, oh well! Sorry, but I'm sick of people insulting writers just because they write about something they think is perverted or retarded.
sandy2x400 - Piece of advice: Never write again. Thanks
Chuck Norris Joke of the Day
Chuck Norris once bowled a 300. Without a ball. He wasn't even in a bowling alley.
Thursday, August 7, 2008
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Megan(pssh freshman), John, Monica(pssh freshman), Jelly, Leroy, ME!!!, and EMERSON!!!!!!!!!!!
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omg CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2 OH EM GEEE
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